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            My boot heels clicked as I strolled down the cobblestone lane on a frigid November evening in Berlin and all seemed well. My name is " " and I am the second highest ranked officer in the Fuhrer's SS. I've done a great deal of commendable deeds to earn that rank.
            On the morning of September 8, 1939 I said farewell to my twin brother as he led his battalion of Panzer tanks to the Polish border. I didn't hear from him for several years, when I did it was in a rushed letter saying that he was being transferred to the frontlines in northern Africa to fight along side Rommel. Our family has a deep history in Germany's armed forces; ranging from mere police officers to a General of the Army.
            Although I don't report directly to Hitler, I'm honored to have such an illustrious position. I almost wish my mother and father could see me now, unfortunately for them they were Jewish and had to be executed. Luckily, my brother and I had never been too enthusiastic about Judaism and we were taken under the Iron Eagle's wing. We now both hold positions of authority and demand respect in Hitler's glorious Nazi Empire.
I finished my patrol and entered a building on my left. After ascending a steep flight of stairs, the guards at the top nodded to me and allowed me to pass. I proceeded through a large set of double doors and smirked as my little side project came into view. A young grunt handed me a scoped rifle and saluted weakly.
"That will be all, Private."
"Y-yes sir." squeaked the grunt.
            I raised the scope to my eye and looked through the large group of slowly moving silhouettes for my target. "Private?" I said as I spoke into an intercom, "have the subjects been fed this evening?"
"No sir, just as you ordered."
"Excellent, thank you." I replied warmly and switched off the intercom. Now was a time to hunt and see how my subjects will react.
I hate trying to categorize my writing

Anywho, he obviously needs a name.
Suggestions, NAO. please
Also; I'm pretty bad with dialougue, so if somebody could edit those parts and send it to me in a Note that'd be great.
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MarzEz's avatar
Johannes Schmidt?
Johannes is a fairly common German name...